The Definition of Good Attention

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You sat patiently on Dave's couch waiting for him to get done recording another “sick beat” on his computer, but your patience was running out. How long has it been? An hour? Two? You wondered to yourself. After a few more minutes of waiting you just couldn't take it anymore. You quietly crept to his bedroom door and pushed it open a crack. You saw Dave with his headphones on listening to his new 'masterpiece'. You thought about what to do for a few more minutes before deciding on a little surprise. You crept up to him and, gathering all your courage, smashed your lips onto his. He sat there shocked as you kissed him.


Dave's PoV:

I am getting kissed by my biggest crush, oh, wait, shit! I'm getting kissed by my biggest crush!


Normal PoV:


He started kissing back slowly moving you onto his lap. Now it was your turn to be shocked. Both of your faces turned crimson. As the two of you started making out you heard a knock on the door. You quickly got out of Dave's lap and sat on his bed.

“Come in,” Dave said his attention now turned back towards the computer. Dirk walked in.

“ 'Sup dude,” He said, he turned towards you “Hey, what's a girl gotta do to get some good attention?” He asked before closing the door and shouting “I'm getting orange juice,” Through it. Dave turned around taking the headphones off of his ears. He was still blushing. He walked over to you and sat down.

“Now, what was that all about?” He asked

“Well, y-you see,” You sighed, “IkindoflikeyouandIkindofsawthebestopportunitytokissyoutheresoyeah,” You said.

“What?”

“I kind of like you?”

“Mm-hmm”

“It's okay if you don't like me ba-” You started to say before a certain pair of lips cut you off. After about a minute you started kissing back. Dave leaned you back on his bed, laying his body on top of yours. You both stopped kissing when your lungs burned for air. His lips kissed your jawline and trailed to your neck instantly finding your sweet spot. He ravashed that area making you moan. He smirked enjoying the sounds he was making you make. He began to nip your collarbone when suddenly the door swung open to reveal Dirk. Cue the blushing couple in three...two...one. Both of your faces turned redder than tomatoes.

“DAVE! I SAID GOOD ATTENTION!” Dirk shouted. Dave smirked.

“But, she likes it, which means it must be 'good attention',” Your face turned redder (if that was possible) Dirk slammed the door. Dave turned his attention back to you before, well...um...when a man and woman love eachother very much...

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Extrinity-Crash96's avatar
The last line reminds me of my friends quote... I can't reapeat it for child sake though